Once I met this girl
who created memories in her head..
She held hostage of her past
As she laid at night on her bed..The days of despair had blinded her sight
She needed to awaken
As she was loosing the fight..She had now found sunlight on her way
Her kids are her saviour
They release the burden that wanted to stay..
Now whenever I see that girl
I no longer see her cry..
Despite the negativity in the world
There is hope in her eye..
Amazing
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Beautifully written poem. ππΌ
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ππ Tysm..
I am new with this blog thing naa so praises mean a lotπ
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I am also not too old. Although number of my posts would tell otherwise. But I still feel a newbie. I want people to read and share their views.. Uff.. I have gotten into this vicious cycle of writing. π
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You arent old on wordpress??..Really?..Whom are you fooling?…I recently read some 100th post of yours..π
But its good that you are feeling new here..That shows being an amazing writer you are still open to learning..π
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The thing is I was too much active here. Sometimes posted 4 posts in a single day and that’s how so much posts. Now though, I have stopped doing so. ππ
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I tried this as well..When i was new in this field..I wrote three poems in a day..And the best part I composed them in arnd one and half hourπ
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I had written them an year ago and it was just residing in my Google keep.
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okhzzz..So here you finally have an option to flaunt your talentπ
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It’s talent? You sure?
I got to know wordpress accidently.
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Soo with this wonderful accident I got to know an amazing bloggerππ»
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You got to know a blogger by accident. Yes
Amazing… That you have to decide. π
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Decision taken..your writing skills are amazing broππ»
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Thank you.. π
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Good oneππ…….go ahead.
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For sure..βπ»
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Splendous!
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Tysmπ
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Nice one
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Truly beautiful !! Even i would like to find hope like her but for now i will find pleasure in reading about hope in other’s lives π
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You surely will find your hope somewhere!π€
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Very well written
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Tysm..π€
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Beautiful & i love the wordplay of thoughts,you write amazing!!keep writing & have a great day aheadππ
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