You were like a sister to me
You were my favourite friend
I always thought we shared the bond
That would never end..
You remember the time when we were in school
Our relation depended on only one rule..
You smiled, I smiled it always worked like that
My mind was filled with your thoughts, your heart-my habitat..
What happened I can’t blame it all on you
But tell me what am I supposed to do??
Everyone says its going to be all right
Do you know I pray for you every single night??
People say you will come back to me
But I feel it impossible,why can’t everyone see!!
Your memories will be there,until I die..
A Heart Touching Poem….
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Soo swwttt….my cutiee poetโบ๐ me hu to..
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Aabhaat aapka๐..I knw tu hamesha mere saath rhegi๐..
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Aabhaar๐ท
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Kya baat h mam simply great yr seriously tht s damn great gud awsm words nhi h hilla diya yr
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เคเคชเคเฅ เคธเคเคพเคฐเคพเคคเฅเคฎเค เคตเคฟเคเคพเคฐ เคเคพเคจเคเคฐ เคนเคพเคฐเฅเคฆเคฟเค เคชเฅเคฐเคธเคจเฅเคจเคคเคพ เคนเฅเค เคธเคฐเฅคเฅค๐
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Really vry nice dear๐i too miss those days..n thankx for d poem..vry heart touching..๐โค
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Anytime..๐
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Broken glasses are difficult to be glued
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True..
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Impossible *
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Awesome touching words.. Broken friendship is more saddening than failed love.. But we are here for you always๐๐
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I know that..my wp family๐โ๐ป
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Yup WordPress family๐ btw do checkout my latest post.. I hope you will like it๐๐
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Sure thing..๐ค
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Felt sad… deep poem!
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Oh.. the pain directly come to my heart…
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Glad that you were able to feel the emotions..๐
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A heart warming poem so well composed.
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Thanks a lot..๐
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Welcome Anji
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Nyc ๐๐
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Thank you..๐
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That’s a heart touching beautiful poem. I hope everything is okay.
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Yupp..everything is fine๐
Some people arent just meant to be in our lives..๐
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haha! Yes that’s true.
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Thanks for sharing this. I am going through this very thing with a dear friend of mine. It gives me hope that someday we can be friends again. Thanks again. Love it. Hugs!
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Surely, you both will be together one day..๐
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I hope so.
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You meant one of your best friend died?sorry about that.This beautiful poem really shows how close you both were ๐
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She didnt die..We just got seprated๐
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Agar me aapka poem galath pada tho sorry ok ๐
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Its ok..happens
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Aap kiss state se he behenji?
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I just like asking these things to other bloggers.That is all.i am from kerala and what about your brother?Has he gone for studies somewhere?
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Sometimes without understanding the situation i ask stupid things.your brother has gone for job purpose.i could have red it before asking you.sorry again ๐
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Death or betrayal?
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Betrayal thing..
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Then I can absolutely, totally relate to this…I wrote something under the very similar idea once! I think it was called Evanescentโชtake them off your mind and burn their ahses!
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Wow!!..i am impressed by the defination of this word..๐..
If you have written, it must be beautiful..๐
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Yes I loved the word the moment I Googled it! ๐โ
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Felt sad hope u keep going
Im really a great fan of
What u write yrrrrr๐๐ป๐๐ป๐๐ป๐๐ป๐
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This comment or moreover this compliment made my day…Or night as it is 1:01 AM๐
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BEAUTIFUL poem.. ๐ฉ
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Thnq so much๐
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Why do you write things which I can relate and miss them and wish these things could happen in a good way again? ๐ I also had quite a few failed friendship. It hurts more than breakups, trust me ๐ญ
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Whatever happens is for our own good..I have already developed this optimistic attitude..You too should..
And yeah, I dont mean to make you nostalgic..I am sorry if I did..These are just some experiences that life taught me..Perhaps, everyone of us went through all this, hence this feels similar..๐
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I am out of all heartbreaks now stronger than I was before hseartbreaks. I am all well now and learned to live alone, just pursuing all my passions (which includes writing as well among manyyyyy) and living for society. I lived all my life for myself and always got hurt. Now, I am living for poor and needy, no one can hurt me.
And no, no need for apologies. If I didn’t wanted to feel the past, I would not have went on to read all your posts. I loved all your posts since from your Day 1 on WordPress!!
Yeah, everyone on WordPress went through it I can say!
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Not everyone has read all my posts from Day 1 actually..
And indeed its excruciatingly thoughtful of you to think about others..
Stay blessed๐
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Thoughtful? I do not think so. If I was, 7 people would not have spoiled my birthday I guess ๐ข
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But thank you so much for understanding me and wishing me. Stay blessed!
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I today felt for the first time in my life that I was selfish, if I was not selfish, 7 people woupd not have judged me in a bad way
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Someone, a girl, one of the bloggers whose writing I admire, wusne mera ek comment pe question kiya aur kaha stop bragging your comments on my post as it is public. Mujhe kya pata tha WordPress mein emotions nahi express kar sakte.
And sorry haan mam, aapke har post mein meine kitne mera judhemental and subjective comments diye hain sorry. Aaga se kabhi kisi pe post ke comments hi nahi karunga kyonki meri har comment mein ek humaity hoti hain, aur humanity hoti hain toh emotions toh aatw hi haina mam?
Meinblog site bhi delete kar duunga soon, kya pata mera posts pe kisine aur kuch comment kar diya toh, who know that girl herself comments on my post something. I am too strong to handle that even though I said I am strong now. I am not strong mam. I am just trying to pretend being strong, not to look weak to the people because if I show them I am weakthey will not respect me saying he is so weak, being such a grown up mam. I can’t bear those weird even if I become 50 someday soon!!
I ENDED UP A LOSER TODAY ON MY 25TH BIRTHDAY WHEN I STARTED FEELING FROM HEART AND THANKING GOD MAKING ME MEET WordpPress family. AND I THANKED FOR MAKING ME THE MOST BLESSED ON EARTH!!
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What happened sir?..You ok?
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Its okay its life. Life goes on. After that comments, I have received tonssssss of appreciations and even I do not doubt a little, i have touched people’s heart with my HARD WORDS and I even know such people who are breaking people’s heart by those soft words. Everyone on blogger knows how to use words and few, very few just write such stuff to receive the comments, stuffs and even follows they expect. I am even I lose everything madam. I am the toughest man of the world I can say. Criticism mad e what I am today, I am nothing I know, still I dare to be real and brutally honest unlike some. Enough Said I guess!
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