Hey everyone this was my first poem..That was the first time I felt the excitement and the thrill after I discovered this talent of mine..
Sharing it with all of you..Hope you all will enjoy..Don’t forget to comment what you feel about it..π
The feelings i have for you
You will understand on your own…
I want you around me, beside me
at every dusk and dawn..
You are brighter than the ecplise, clearer than the sky
The moment I see you, I bloom like the 4th of July..
The best part about you is you took a glimpse
Not just at my body, but my soul..
Your love wrenched all of the insecurities, made me feel complete..whole
Shines in the dark, like a jet airline at night…
Your love made me Snowbell, The princess as pure as white..
You my baby, are my brightest possession..
Well, this is just a gesture cause my love is beyond any expression..ππ
ππππ this is amazing!
Why don’t you try writing more…
I remembered snowbell from Stuart the little while reading that part, haha…. ππ
Great!
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It is simply amazing. Very beautiful!
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Ohh teri kya likh diya awsn h ye toh π
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Keep writing jldi line lagne wali h padhne walo ki
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naa naa yr..aapki poetry k aage toh kch b ni hπ π
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Woh toh dikh rha h π aap awsm ho
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dikh rha h aapka talent aapki poems k lyrics se!!π»
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your first poem and its beautiful … cant wait for more poems from you π Keep writing and inspiring others
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Naa naa that was my first poem..but i posted it later..I have posted some of my newly written as well..
Anywayz thanksπ€
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Spreading love through your poems is great. πππΌ
Written well.
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For a first poem it is too good. You should keep on writing it.
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Really this was your first one? From rhyme to feel..everything was simply amazing π
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Tysm..Maybe coz of the feelingsπ
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Yess and Feel is everything β€
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woww… nyc lines… really lyk it…π
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Beautifully crafted lovely verse…keep on writing & all the very best!!ππππ
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